PEBRI YUNI BR HUTABARAT

PEBRI YUNI BR HUTABARAT (1888203024)

A.      The data of my essay.

1.        Introductory paragraph : From what I have read, KBBI says that hoaxes are fake news.

2.        Body 1 : The government conducts counseling on how to receive true and false news.

Ø  On counseling conducted by the Directorate of Metro Jaya Regional Police Binmas together with the Indonesian Culture and Museum Observer Group (KPBMI) on Thursday, April 4, 2019 about hoax and hate speech at the National Awakening Museum, Mr. Rendy from the Jakarta Police said that hoax were fake news made by convincing so it is considered right by many people. This is one of the efforts made by the government to prevent false news.

3.        Body 2 : The government gives punishment to hoax spreaders.

Ø  Head of the Public Information Bureau of the Republic of Indonesia National Police Headquarters Commissioner Rikwanto said the perpetrators of hoaxes could be threatened Article 28 paragraph 1 of the Information and Electronic Transaction Law or the ITE Law. It is a punishment that has been applied by the government.

4.        Body 3 : The government makes a reliable source of information.

Ø  The public must be more critical in choosing the source of information obtained. For example, the Tribunnews, Detik.com, Kompas and others. This will make the information obtained by the public more reliable.

B.       Original text and the results of my paraphrasing.

1.        My original text : In the Indonesian Dictionary (KBBI), hoax is translated into a hoaks which is defined as "berita bohong". (https://www.bulelengkab.go.id/detail/artikel/pengertian-hoax-dan-ciri-cirinya-41)

My paraphrase : From what I have read, KBBI says that hoaxes are fake news.

2.        My original text : Directorate of Metro Jaya Regional Police Binmas in collaboration with the Indonesian Culture and Museum Observer Group (KPBMI), Thursday, April 4, 2019, organized a training and counseling event about hoaxes and expressions of hatred at the National Awakening Museum. The activity involved about 60 people in the community, including students, scouts and communities. The material was given by Mr. Rendy from the Jakarta Police. According to Mr. Rendy, hoaks (from English, hoaxes) are hoaxes that are made convincing so that they are seen to be true by many people. (https://www.kompasiana.com/djuliantosusantio/5ca6936dcc52830dc734fea5/penyuluhan-berita-hoaks-oleh-polda-metro-dan-komunitas?page=all)

My paraphrase : On counseling conducted by the Directorate of Metro Jaya Regional Police Binmas together with the Indonesian Culture and Museum Observer Group (KPBMI) on Thursday, April 4, 2019 about hoax and hate speech at the National Awakening Museum, Mr. Rendy from the Jakarta Police said that hoax were fake news made by convincing so it is considered right by many people. This is one of the efforts made by the government to prevent false news.

3.        My original text : According to the Head of the Public Information Bureau of the National Police Headquarters of the Republic of Indonesia, Senior Commissioner Rikwanto, the perpetrators of hoax spreaders could be threatened Article 28 paragraph 1 of the Information and Electronic Transaction Law or the ITE Law. In the article stated, "Anyone who intentionally or without the right to spread false and misleading news, the threat could be subject to a maximum sentence of six years and a maximum fine of Rp 1 billion." via a short message to reporters, Sunday, November 20, 2016. (https://nasional.tempo.co/read/821644/mabes-polri-penyebar-hoax-diancam-hukuman-6-tahun-penjara).

My paraphrase : Head of the Public Information Bureau of the Republic of Indonesia National Police Headquarters Commissioner Rikwanto said the perpetrators of hoaxes could be threatened Article 28 paragraph 1 of the Information and Electronic Transaction Law or the ITE Law. It is a punishment that has been applied by the government.

4.        My original text : Examples of popular information sources in Indonesia are the Tribunnews, Detik.com, Kompas and others because the writers have been selected first. (https://www.nesabamedia.com/pengertian-sumber-informasi/).

My paraphrase : The public must be more critical in choosing the source of information obtained. For example, the Tribunnews, Detik.com, Kompas and others. This will make the information obtained by the public more reliable.