Jumat, 01 Mei 2020

Argumentative Writing


Thesis Statement         : Misuse of fake news/hoax on social media
Summary and paraphrase of each paragraph  :
1.        Discussion :
Hoaxes are fake news that is intentionally made by people who also know that the news is fakes.

2.        How hoaxes work :
There are two factors a person easily believes in hoax news from a psychological perspective, namely when the information obtained is in accordance with what he thinks and when someone gets positive information that is not necessarily true.
The spread of hoax is also influenced by people's experience in using search engine and experience in making hoax news that is more neatly structured and systematic according to Lazonder, Biemans, & Wopereis, 2000.
Although many sites have been blocked, hoax news has not yet disappeared from human life. There have even been casualties resulting from hoax news received such as hoax news about missing children which makes people more aware of others.

3.        The role of government in hoax news :
In dealing with hoax news, the government has established several regulations that will make the perpetrators and disseminators of hoax news bound by sanctions based on the Criminal Code, Law No.11 of 2008 concerning Information and Electronic Transactions (ITE), Law No.40 of 2008 concerning the Elimination of Racial and Ethnic Discrimination.
In addition, the government has also blocked hoax sites, although this has not succeeded in making the perpetrators stop making and spreading hoaxes.
Several other ways the government does in fighting and preventing the spread of hoax are laws regarding the spread of hoax such as Article 28 paragraph 1 and 2 of Law No. 11 of 2008 concerning ITE, Articles 14 and 15 of Law No. 1 of 1946, Articles 311 and 378 of the Criminal Code, as well as Law No. 40 of 2008 concerning the Elimination of Racial and Ethnic Discrimination are a number of legal products that can be used to combat the spread of hoaxes. In addition to legal channels, the government has also created a national cyber agency by utilizing the International Health and Trust + Positive program which acts as a censor and blocks hoax distribution sites.
In each journalistic product a QR code has been applied. This will facilitate the investigation of the article makers that contain hoax news.
In addition to law and social media, education has also become one of the platforms to fight and prevent the spread of hoaxes by increasing reading interest. based on the study of "Most Littered Nation In the World" conducted by Central Connecticut State University, Indonesia was ranked 60 out of 61 countries about reading interest (Skip, 2016). Therefore, education must increase interest in reading to add insight to the younger generation so that it is not easy to believe the news without being accompanied by truth.

4.        The role of the media and society :
To fight and prevent the spread of hoaxes, Facebook makes a feature that will put a dispute mark on each article link that contains news about hoaxes. This will make it easier for the public to report articles that are not accompanied by the truth.
Besides Facebook, Line also tries to fight hoaxes through “Line New”.
In addition to the social media platform, the community also began to initiate the Turn Back Hoax program, where hoax information will be identified and published about its truth through various media, including the Facebook group and through the Turn Back Hoax website itself.

Outline of My Essay   :

Topic               : Hoax
TS                    : Misuse of fake news/hoax on social media
Title                 : United eradicate hoaxes!!!
Introductory Paragraph           : Hoaxes are fake news that is intentionally made by people who also know that the news is fakes.
Body 1                        : How hoaxes work.
Body 2                        : The role of government in hoax news.
Body 3                        : The role of the media and society.
Conclusion      : The government, society and social media are agents who play an important role in fighting and preventing the spread of hoax news.

My Essay        :

United eradicate hoaxes!!!

Hoaxes are fake news that is intentionally made by people who also know that the news is fakes. Fake news is written and published usually with the aim of misleading the minds of others.  hoaxes can also damage the good name of others, damage peace but provide financial or political benefits to hoax spreaders.  hoaxes often use sensational, dishonest, or directly fabricated news to increase the number of readers.  Hoax has no positive side.  Therefore, to eradicate hoaxes, the government must be firm against the spread of hoaxes.
There are two factors a person easily believes in hoax news from a psychological perspective, namely when the information obtained is in accordance with what he thinks and when someone gets positive information that is not necessarily true. The spread of hoax is also influenced by people's experience in using search engine and experience in making hoax news that is more neatly structured and systematic according to Lazonder, Biemans, & Wopereis, 2000. There have even been casualties resulting from hoax news received such as hoax news about missing children which makes people more aware of others.
In dealing with hoax news, the government has established several regulations that will make the perpetrators and disseminators of hoax news bound by sanctions based on the Criminal Code, Law No.11 of 2008 concerning Information and Electronic Transactions (ITE), Law No.40 of 2008 concerning the Elimination of Racial and Ethnic Discrimination. The government has also blocked hoax sites, although this has not succeeded in making the perpetrators stop making and spreading hoaxes. Several other ways the government does in fighting and preventing the spread of hoax are laws regarding the spread of hoax such as Article 28 paragraph 1 and 2 of Law No. 11 of 2008 concerning ITE, Articles 14 and 15 of Law No. 1 of 1946, Articles 311 and 378 of the Criminal Code, as well as Law No. 40 of 2008 concerning the Elimination of Racial and Ethnic Discrimination are a number of legal products that can be used to combat the spread of hoaxes. In addition to legal channels, the government has also created a national cyber agency by utilizing the International Health and Trust + Positive program which acts as a censor and blocks hoax distribution sites. In social media, each journalistic product a QR code has been applied. This will facilitate the investigation of the article makers that contain hoax news. Besides to law and social media, education has also become one of the platforms to fight and prevent the spread of hoaxes by increasing reading interest. based on the study of "Most Littered Nation In the World" conducted by Central Connecticut State University, Indonesia was ranked 60 out of 61 countries about reading interest (Skip, 2016). Therefore, education must increase interest in reading to add insight to the younger generation so that it is not easy to believe the news without being accompanied by truth.
Some steps made in some social media also function to fight and prevent the spread of hoax news. Like too fight and prevent the spread of hoaxes, Facebook makes a feature that will put a dispute mark on each article link that contains news about hoaxes. This will make it easier for the public to report articles that are not accompanied by the truth. Besides Facebook, Line also tries to fight hoaxes through “Line New”. In addition to the social media platform, the community also began to initiate the Turn Back Hoax program, where hoax information will be identified and published about its truth through various media, including the Facebook group and through the Turn Back Hoax website itself.
In conclusion, the government, society and social media are agents who play an important role in fighting and preventing the spread of hoax news. Communities need to be equipped with knowledge of the internet Healthy with media literacy so they can recognize the characteristics of hoax news, and news recipients can access, analyze, evaluate, in taking the meaning of news.